Persuasive Paragraph

Two days' ago, New and I wrote a persuasive paragraph about football shoes. Here it is:

I want buy football shoes. To start with, I love playing football. I play football with my friends everyday, but I would enjoy it more if I had football shoes. Also, I will get injured if I don't have shoes. When I kick a ball, I will hurt my toes or may be raining or perhaps I will fall over. All in all, please buy football shoes for me.

That's all for today

Bye!